The Tomb

 This week we were using on image as a story starter. check out my tuhituhi, 

Dan had been digging all morning. Along with his team of fellow archaeologists, countless tons and dirt and sand had been removed. At first the mechanical diggers had done their bit, to be followed by spades and shovels. Now, as the team neared their prize, their tools became trowels and delicate brushes.

Hours of sweat and toil in the blistering heat had brought little reward as yet, but things were about to change. Dan stood in front of what he hoped would be the most significant discovery of his career so far, and gently began to untie the knot that had sealed the door for thousands of years…

Hi my name is Dan i'm am an archaeologist. I love to discover new things like ancient treasures. I am 22 years old.There I was with my team unveiling the tomb that we carefully brushed the dust.As soon as we untied it we stood in shock and saw tunnels made of gold and stone. The walls had ancient drawings of how the people Subdivide over the years. 

As we walked in looking at the drawings we saw one of them we did not understand but the only one was Dan we learnt about this kind of stuff in school.

he looked at it and he could tell it meant  

bootstrap's.

We did not like the sound of that    t at all as soon as we pulled on one of the touches on the wall an earth we said but then the tunnels lifted up. 

We started to take a small stroll to see what the Tim pill or Tomb had laying inside. We walked diaper and diaper.

When we were walking all of a sate a carols Metamucil creature came out of nowhere and it said to us turn back there's nothing for you here our do u want to end up like one of the others. Dan (gulped) as he and his team walked back towards the entry .

As they walked out Dan saw a tunnel so he went walking towards it then as he stepped into the tunnel he turned around and saw that the door was no longer there.

He remembered that the ancient drawing on the wall was trying to warn him about the tunnel that appears and then disappears. 

as soon as he walked in the danger was just getting started. 

slowly and slowly down the tunnels trying to avoid every bootstrap he came across the swing axes and racing balls, pool full of hum grey shacks, Pyrenees dropping from above and last of all poisonous arrows that shoot from out of the wall. 

He finally made it to the end of the tunnels he found a dog? It was strange but on the dog there was a note that said thanks for playing my little game but the game won't be as easy as this one ha ha ha (and you get 3 wishes). 

I wish for the way out of here and for my 2 wish I want to know what will happen if I would never become an archaeologist, what would be my job instil and lucky last I want to find a piece of history to give to a museum . 

your wish is my command as the ground started to shake a doorway out of here opened and on the way out I saw a vase so I grabbed it and as I went out I saw like a little move in my mind and it was about another job which would have been my life which was a banker.

Then as I stepped out of the tunnels I woke up. All of that was just my mind playing a trick on me and my job was a banker and( I got to keep the dog by the way her name is coley).

Book Creator

These are My 3 favourite pieces of tuhituhi I have written this year.

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The wishgranter

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I live underground  beneath the fountain of wishes. My name is the wishgranter. I make all the little wishes come true. My little house isn't that great, it's just a big job speaking of jobs, mine is boring all I do is grant wishes. After all, most people often wish for money or they wish for a baby, food, house, toys and happiness.But Moseley money for some odd resin all I want well I would wish for happiness because as u know my job is so boring. One time I thought that I would go above ground and see what happens on a normal day. It looked like fun and they would have yummy food like pancakes, bacon and eggs. They would play around with a skipping rope mostly the kids but then when it got darker everyone went inside so I went back to granting wishes and that's the way it all goes every day.

 

Storyboard That

Today we have been learning how to create a storyboard using storyboard that. It was fun choosing the characters and backgrounds.
Made with Storyboard That

                                                               Time to create some imagery...
For our writing this term we are learning how to create poems / rotarota or creative paragraphs. We get a new hook each day. Here are some of my pieces of writing. We are especially focusing on imagery and using our senses.

Ruin

Once upon a time in to the future 5000 years ago. There I was standing alone I was looking around myself I thought I could never believed my eyes but then there was same wacky Polluted in the water there was an old highway with trees and mouth Growing out of it I hoped that I would see another living Parsons again. But then I saw a broken down building the name was could Haven Nanosystems I have been looking for a safe for 2 weeks now but then I finally find it but then I it pushed it out of the window I hold a big BOOM! And a big BAN! It was so loud, it was so so nosey too that I just had to run down the stairs I saw the safe I tranb to open it at fisht and it just opened a cloud of dust and dirt got on my fash it smart torbole like old rotten food. I saw an old touch pad I ped it up my hanb liteb up the carlo was blue I fate same power but I hoed same tinki it sand like havering so I started to run but then I saw it I sled down the side of an old breg then I saw a Fearless black motorbike. Then I looked behind me I saw the big havering robot so I hopped on the black Fearless motorbike. I speed of as fast as I could but then I saw the dig having robot riot behind me trying to get me. But then it send out mini robots to desauw me and blast me so then they get me. We went into a long darek tanol filled with old cars from the wacky Polluted I saw same light and that was good for me but bad for the robots. I saw that I had only one bom left so I waited until the end of the dark tanol so I het it on my black Fearless motorbike then I wanted enroll the end of the dark tanol so I stick it to the top of the dark tanol and then when the mini robots came out it Exploded. But little did I know the big having robot was waiting for me on the other side of the dark tanol. So I stop and looked at the big having robot it stade to shoot at me so I put the Pedal to the metal. I saw a little footpath but it ledes to a clef so I went up onto the footpath and jupde of on my black Fearless motorbike and did a backflip and pot my blue shoot into it was spring out of control but fall to the ground so I hopped up and woade away from it.