I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, 5 March 2020
It's coming to an end
It’s coming to an end
The moment they had feared was finally upon them the electric storm had arrived from the moment I saw the storm I thought it was time to escape go somewhere different in the galaxy I know that the government had a UFO and all this time we thought that the aliens had a UFO but no it was on earth all this with the government but the government sold it for 2000$ to a village so when they can escape if anything like this happens so they got all of the animals and some other animals is will they got some people and some from a little town called Temuka after all it could very 998 people so we took as much food as we could we all hopped on the kids were crying for their parents and the parents were worried about their kids they had to fly the ship out of her as we lift the planet with light speed as we watch the plant tron to ashes people started to Cyrus most of their family was gone they fund a new plant and they called it wondering they land the ship and hoped of this planet had more trees and more water and afternoon food to last a life time
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Hello Ada.
ReplyDeleteYou have got some interesting ideas for a story.I think next time you need to re-read your work before posting your work.I found it very difficult to read your story.Maybe next time you could use some more punctuation.It would make it look tidier.I look forward to hearing from you.