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Wednesday 26 August 2020

The Tomb

 This week we were using on image as a story starter. check out my tuhituhi, 


Dan had been digging all morning. Along with his team of fellow archaeologists, countless tons and dirt and sand had been removed. At first the mechanical diggers had done their bit, to be followed by spades and shovels. Now, as the team neared their prize, their tools became trowels and delicate brushes.

Hours of sweat and toil in the blistering heat had brought little reward as yet, but things were about to change. Dan stood in front of what he hoped would be the most significant discovery of his career so far, and gently began to untie the knot that had sealed the door for thousands of years…

Hi my name is Dan i'm am an archaeologist. I love to discover new things like ancient treasures. I am 22 years old.There I was with my team unveiling the tomb that we carefully brushed the dust.As soon as we untied it we stood in shock and saw tunnels made of gold and stone. The walls had ancient drawings of how the people Subdivide over the years. 

As we walked in looking at the drawings we saw one of them we did not understand but the only one was Dan we learnt about this kind of stuff in school.


he looked at it and he could tell it meant  

bootstrap's.


We did not like the sound of that    t at all as soon as we pulled on one of the touches on the wall an earth we said but then the tunnels lifted up. 


We started to take a small stroll to see what the Tim pill or Tomb had laying inside. We walked diaper and diaper.


When we were walking all of a sate a carols Metamucil creature came out of nowhere and it said to us turn back there's nothing for you here our do u want to end up like one of the others. Dan (gulped) as he and his team walked back towards the entry .


As they walked out Dan saw a tunnel so he went walking towards it then as he stepped into the tunnel he turned around and saw that the door was no longer there.


He remembered that the ancient drawing on the wall was trying to warn him about the tunnel that appears and then disappears. 


as soon as he walked in the danger was just getting started. 


slowly and slowly down the tunnels trying to avoid every bootstrap he came across the swing axes and racing balls, pool full of hum grey shacks, Pyrenees dropping from above and last of all poisonous arrows that shoot from out of the wall. 


He finally made it to the end of the tunnels he found a dog? It was strange but on the dog there was a note that said thanks for playing my little game but the game won't be as easy as this one ha ha ha (and you get 3 wishes). 

I wish for the way out of here and for my 2 wish I want to know what will happen if I would never become an archaeologist, what would be my job instil and lucky last I want to find a piece of history to give to a museum . 


your wish is my command as the ground started to shake a doorway out of here opened and on the way out I saw a vase so I grabbed it and as I went out I saw like a little move in my mind and it was about another job which would have been my life which was a banker.


Then as I stepped out of the tunnels I woke up. All of that was just my mind playing a trick on me and my job was a banker and( I got to keep the dog by the way her name is coley).


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